hi, everybody. this is nathalie´s complain . what I am going to do is correct it. the first one is the original, and the second one is corrected by me.

Something that can change our society

The reason to send you this letter is to inform you that something that nowadays really worries me is the little concern to have at least one national day dedicate to do exercise in family. Because of the bad life that families are having. For example they are eating many junk foods and have a bad alimentation and because our country is letting behind do exercise to have healthy life.
I know last year it was possible but I think that this have to be more frequency. First this habit is going to help that parents share and spend more time with their children. It’s going to improve and help our health in a good way. Finally it could increase that those days community has a day totally different, out of worries, works, homework, etc.
I`m glad that you could read my letter and I hope that you can think about that. I think that habit could change our society.
Greeting Nathalie V.


Something that can change our society(p)
The reason to send you ( ) this letter is to inform you( ) that( ) something that nowadays( ) really worries me (p) is the little concern to have at least one national day dedicate to do exercises in family. Because of the bad life that families are having. For example (p) they are eating many junk foods and have(s) a bad alimentation (w.w.)(p) and because our country is letting behind doing (s) exercise to have (x) healthy life.
I know last year it was possible(p) but I think that() this have to be more frequency (s). First this habit is going to help that parents share and spend more time with their children. It’s going to improve and help our health in a good way. Finally (p) it could increase that those days community has (s) a day totally different, out of worries, works, homework, etc.
I’m glad that you could read my letter and (p) I hope that you can think about that. I think that habit could change our society.
Greeting Nathalie V.